You are a well-spoken and articulate person ! I could feel the passion you have for your product which makes it great for us to listen! Only thing I would say is do not use you hands too much, sometimes people can loose track just for these details. Personally, this exercise was difficult for me because it was my first time publishing a video online. Let's see what comes next!
I thought you did a great job describing your idea for replacing plastic items that we all use on a day-to-day basis. My only concern with this elevator pitch is the specificity of the club. I think you would be better served making this a non-profit project in order to gain an audience outside of college students and professors. However, I liked the idea of providing people with samples of alternatives to plastics to spread the word. Overall, I found your elevator pitch interesting and well thought out!
Hi Monica! I think that you did a great job with articulating yourself and your posture made you seem really confident and composed. I also felt that you paced yourself very well and took the right amount of pauses to emphasize your thoughts. A club on campus would definitely be a great idea because I feel that a lot of people would be passionate about promoting alternatives to plastics, especially because so much plastic ends up littered on our campus.
You are a well-spoken and articulate person ! I could feel the passion you have for your product which makes it great for us to listen! Only thing I would say is do not use you hands too much, sometimes people can loose track just for these details. Personally, this exercise was difficult for me because it was my first time publishing a video online. Let's see what comes next!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job describing your idea for replacing plastic items that we all use on a day-to-day basis. My only concern with this elevator pitch is the specificity of the club. I think you would be better served making this a non-profit project in order to gain an audience outside of college students and professors. However, I liked the idea of providing people with samples of alternatives to plastics to spread the word. Overall, I found your elevator pitch interesting and well thought out!
ReplyDeleteHi Monica! I think that you did a great job with articulating yourself and your posture made you seem really confident and composed. I also felt that you paced yourself very well and took the right amount of pauses to emphasize your thoughts. A club on campus would definitely be a great idea because I feel that a lot of people would be passionate about promoting alternatives to plastics, especially because so much plastic ends up littered on our campus.
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